Chapter Two: A Whole Old World

[Akirapryde]

(OOC: Okay this thread is closed! All posts within this thread are here by considered OOC!

Ice, nice coming in with that last post just under the deadline.

I am opening up three threads during the next twenty four hours. Each thread will be for the following teams.

Adrian & Suki

Jake & the Captain

Eric & Alice

As promised, here are the AP rewards for your involvement. I am going to include a bit of constructive advice with the AP. Please only take this for what it is.

Eric: you are being rewarded with Four (4) Adventure Points, plus one (1) addition for taking up the mantle of leadership in the absence of a strong leadership. Eric has a remarkable ability to maintain leadership should he decide to keep it. Your posts set the standard for everyone to achieve. I have little constructive advice for you other than keep up your efforts.

Adrian: You are being rewarded with four (4) Adventure Points. I have seen more posting from you since you joined the game. being one of the newest players, I know you are getting a feel for your character and the game. So i know that you are still within the learning curve. My advice is to keep growing within your character and within the game as a whole. It also wouldn't be a bad idea to include a bit more of his inner thoughts within your posts.

Jake: You are being reward with three (3) Adventure Points. You are one of the more original players/characters, no one in the game should have a better feel for the game than you. There is no reason why as a player you shouldn't be taking a stronger role in the game. I have all the faith in you and know that you can do this. Jake is (I think) the youngest character (aside from Suki), with the best room to grow. With that in mind, I would also like to see some growth from him in your posts. Take the time to create posts that speak to what Jake is thinking, feeling and doing.

Suki: You are also being rewarded with three (3) Adventure Points. I have noticed that your posts are inconsistent and sometimes are more just filler posts. I know you have the largest adversity being blind, but that doesn't mean that Suki is helpless. She has a remarkable background and unlimited potential. If you want to remove your blindness, please let me know and we can make this change. If you with to continue with this path, we can continue to work on your character's perception (giving her other senses a more clearer advantage).

Thorchan: You are being rewarded with two (2) Adventure Points. Yes I am aware that you are the newest member of the group. But you agreed to take on the role of party leader and this character. I need to see more involvement from the Captain than in recent days. The party needs its Captain and Thorchan is a well developed character who still has lots of room to grow. If you need help keeping pace, please let me know and I will do my best to help you.

Remember that included in these AP rewards, each Character receives their Learn Score equal to Skill Points. Please make sure that you are updating your character sheets with unspent points or changes in characters. Remember that AP and SP are not the same and should not be added up during record keeping.

As always everyone, I am free to be contacted either by KIK, text/phone (PM me for my number), or over this site's PM service.

Recruitment: If you guys don't mind, I would like to put the word out for a couple of new players. I would really like to "awaken" the last remaining members of the Merc Unit. If you have any suggestions on possible players, please talk to me.

Questions about spending your points or looking for suggestions? please talk to me. If you are picking up a new skill, you need to have a reason for getting it. Meaning you have used the skill (unskilled checks) or someone has taught you. Currently I am going to be a bit easy on this rule. However in the future I am going to get much harder on this rule.

I would like to personally thank everyone for their continued involvement in our game. Lets keep up the great work together.

Akira)